MySecretWeapon's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lost in Thought]

Not bad.

Don't listen to them dude, I thought It was pretty cool. I enjoyed the transitions in the art, it was pretty neat.

I will say though, an auto loop is kinda annoying. It's good to have a defined end in things like this.

Either way, Good job, cool effort, and I dig the music, it's interesting if nothing else.

phoenix019 responds:

Thanks, :D

[AMAZING stick flash]

Well

You know we can't let this live. You have to know that. Your work shows great potential and if you take your time and really work on it, you could easily make one of the next great stick fighting videos. Just take your time next time, and really play back your animation some. Get your timing down till it feels right.

Try thinking of a concept more than sticks dying. Try to add some underlying theme to it and if you're going to make the objects in the scene that small, at least have it stretch the page and leave the wreckage behind as the stick figure fights on.

And i'll be purely honest with you, you would have easily gotten a higher score if you had used anything... and i mean ANYTHING other than a sound loop of crickets. Seriously, on that one.. that was an epic fail and a half on the sound loop.

Keep going though, I expect to see great things from your work. Just take your time. No need to rush it.

[Mighty Millie]

Nice

This is a great way to immortalize something important to you. The description alone sold it for me. Well played, may Millie rest in peace.